Hackers can compromise machines for three reasons

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Hackers can compromise machines for three reasons. First , the operating system… Second , the network … Third (or Last), the physical… We present four main contributions in this paper. (i) We show that… (ii) We design a … (iii) We measure… (iv) We show… On the one hand, the equilibrium is…On the other hand, the equilibrium is 39
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Use Parallelism Do not overuse One or two such structure per page Coordination might be more elegant (to be discussed) 40
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Writing Style Sentences Glue between sentences (that is, the flow of idea) to form a paragraph Complex sentences 41
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“How you begin a sentence determines its clarity; how you end it determines its rhythm and grace” — J. M. Williams
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The Beginning of a Sentence In the first few words Define the topic of the sentence Using a well defined and short subject (e.g., a character) A verb defining an action And an object You must not have more than a few words between the subject and the verb, and between the verb and the object Otherwise, revise 43
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The End of a Sentence Put toward the end long clauses and complex structures Use the stress position for the last few words 44
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A new sales initiative that has created a close integration between the garden and home products departments has made significant improvements to the services that Acme offers. Acme has significantly improved its services with a new sales initiative that closely integrates the departments for garden and home products. 45
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Put Long Openings at the End Since most undergraduate students change their fields of study at least once during college careers, many more than once, first- year students who are not certain about their program of studies should not load up their schedules to meet requirements for a particular program First-year students should not load up their schedules with requirements for a particular program, because most of them change their fields of study at least once during their college careers. 46
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Exception The opening might be fine if it is used as a transition with the previous sentence E.g., if-clause, when-clause, because-clause, since- clause, although-clause, etc. referring to the previous sentence If we are to limit this spread of nuclear weapons, we must guarantee the security of nations wanting to arm themselves against their neighbors. 47
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A company that focuses on hiring the best personnel and then trains them not just for the work they are hired to do but for higher-level jobs is likely to earn loyalty of its employees. When a company focuses on hiring the best personnel and then trains them not just for the work they are hired to do but for higher-level jobs, it is likely to earn loyalty of its employees. A company is likely to earn loyalty of its employees when it focuses on hiring the best personnel and then trains them not just for the work they are hired to do but for higher- level jobs.
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