Throughout the essay he makes personal connections to

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equality of races. Throughout the essay he makes personal connections to his point and is teaching these other teachers how they can make a difference in the way they educate their students to better prepare them for the real world, not the way society wants them to be taught. Near the end of the essay Baldwin provides the many actions he would take to ensure that the children of tomorrow have the right education to enhance their potential to make a difference in the world. Application The way that Baldwin used historical events and connected with the reader with shared opinions to increase his ethical appeal was very interesting. I would use this technique in the future because it not only increases his credibility, but also makes a relationship with the reader and draws them into the essay because if someone agrees with something, they are automatically intrigued. I also admired his use of figurative language to enhance the entertainment value of his informational essay. This would be something I would use in future writings because it keeps the audience interested in the text and since the reader isn’t bored and uninterested, they usually grasp onto the information provided better and the text leaves a larger impact on that person rather than if they were dreading having to read the essay.

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