Cloud State University I have learned my freedoms especially with my English

Cloud state university i have learned my freedoms

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PSEO program at St. Cloud State University. I have learned my freedoms, especially with my English 191 class in writing. I am able to express myself in papers, like I never would have been able to at the high school. At the end of the year, we are all familiar with the ending evaluations of the school. We evaluate and make suggestions for improvements. However, these suggestions are not implemented, which is why this proposal will be the hope for the future. In feedback, I was told to focus on the future, and it was the best strategy I included. A strategy I chose when making my proposal was to include the effects for the students, rather than myself to create this type of unity of the student body. The students at the school see these problems but it feels as if the staff have no care. I mention how there seem to be no care with the staff. This seems rather harsh and yes, I admit it rather is harsh, but I do not mean to be harsh to the staff, I do this to be harsh on the issues that the school has yet to repair. I could have made it less harsh, however, I am satisfied with this presence of a “harsh reality” because it feels as if it promotes urgency. Though, as the school has many imperfections, so does this proposal paper. The imperfection I am unsatisfied by is the lack of information I have from the school itself. I could not find records and therefore, I would improve the factual evidence by digging deeper and possibly interviewing the staff who have tenure or the decision-maker himself.
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