2. How did a suggested revision from a peer, tutor, or anyone else help strengthen your paper? If you chose not to incorporate feedback into your essay, explain why. If, for some reason, you did not receive feedback from someone else, why is feedback from others a necessary step in the writing process? (100 words minimum) From the feedback from not only the peer review but after I posted my introduction in the forum for the discussion question after I went and redid my thesis it still was not good enough, so I went back to the drawing board. I chose to incorporate the feedback into my essay because I literally wrote my rough draft in two hours and knew that it needed some work. The feedback gave me some points on what I should do to fix my thesis statement. Overall, I had great feedback on the essay itself. Feedback is necessary because sometimes seeing things in a different way can help you. Everyone does not see things the same way and that is the great thing about it.
3. What progress do you believe you have made as a writer during the course? In what areas do you still need to grow as a writer? Consider the following areas, created by the Council of
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