informative on how I developed as a young man. Look for connotations. Are they accurate? Are they overly emotional? Are they fair? (Chapter 9.3) I don't believe my connotations are overly emotional at all. I think I am right on point with my essay when it comes to portraying the right connotations. Look for trigger words that may suggest racism, sexism or offensive language, and correct. None. Look for words that can be simplified. None Look for words that can be made more specific. After reviewing I think there are a few areas to use more detail. Look for verbs that could be more action specific. None. Examine the transitions (furthermore, next, last year, etc.). Are they accurate and are they in the right places? Should you add more? I should definitely add more transitional words.
Make sure each sentence is complete and clear. All of my sentences are complete. Look for choppy sentences that can be combined into a longer sentence. None Look for wordy sentences that need to be shortened. There were a few sentences that I shortened. Look for wordy sentences or run-on sentences. I tried to stay away from run-on sentences. Check your verb forms and tense. Make sure subjects and verbs agree, and that the verbs are consistently in past or present tense. I have made changes to my verb tenses. Look for pronouns like it, they, she, and he. Make sure what or whom they refer to are clear. All of my pronouns are clear. Check your spelling. All of my spelling is accurate. Check your punctuation. I believe all of my punctuation is accurate. Check your APA essay format. I have had a problem with this in the past, but I believe with my new and improved title page, I am ready to go.
- Spring '11
- Management, Grammatical tense, run-on sentences, 0.0.0.88, 0.0.1.145