informative on how I developed as a young man Look for connotations Are they

Informative on how i developed as a young man look

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informative on how I developed as a young man.  Look for connotations. Are they accurate? Are they overly emotional? Are they fair? (Chapter 9.3) I don't believe my connotations are overly emotional at all. I think I am right on point with my essay when it comes to portraying the right connotations.  Look for trigger words that may suggest racism, sexism or offensive language, and correct. None.  Look for words that can be simplified. None  Look for words that can be made more specific. After reviewing I think there are a few areas to use more detail.  Look for verbs that could be more action specific. None.  Examine the transitions (furthermore, next, last year, etc.). Are they accurate and are they in the right places? Should you add more? I should definitely add more transitional words.
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 Make sure each sentence is complete and clear. All of my sentences are complete.  Look for choppy sentences that can be combined into a longer sentence. None  Look for wordy sentences that need to be shortened. There were a few sentences that I shortened.  Look for wordy sentences or run-on sentences. I tried to stay away from run-on sentences.  Check your verb forms and tense. Make sure subjects and verbs agree, and that the verbs are consistently in past or present tense. I have made changes to my verb tenses.  Look for pronouns like it, they, she, and he. Make sure what or whom they refer to are clear. All of my pronouns are clear.  Check your spelling. All of my spelling is accurate.  Check your punctuation. I believe all of my punctuation is accurate.  Check your APA essay format. I have had a problem with this in the past, but I believe with my new and improved title page, I am ready to go.
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  • Management, Grammatical tense, run-on sentences, 0.0.0.88, 0.0.1.145

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