Events that have happened while working in the

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events that have happened while working in the preschool; that would not necessarily occur every day. Even though it is my strength, I still have room for improvement. I needed to make a couple of corrections throughout some of my papers. For the summary I had to fix one awkward statement, where I described Roberts as still teaching students. This is awkward because he is dead and cannot still being teaching students when he is not living. For the comparative narrative and cause and effect papers I had to change one or two transitions. Between some paragraphs I did not even have a transitional phrase or I needed a stronger one. Although I had to correct some of the issues with the focus and development, it still shows as my strength since I had to make fewer corrections than the other topics. Throughout the whole revision process I found myself constantly correcting my grammar and mechanics. In every paper I had constant comma errors. I had the most trouble with
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paragraph one in the process explanation. Even though all the errors were marked on my paper on how to correct the mistakes, I looked in Patterns and also reviewed the practice quizzes we did in class to understand why I kept missing the commas. The most common mistakes I made
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