Elevator Pitch Feedback - warshay

Not the exact same but used local prov business and

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not the exact same, but used local prov business and was like a specific groupon: [email protected] - Good job talking about the money side of things as that is really what matters in the end – how are you making money, I may have missed it Simple Touch - nice slides - PillowTalk: have you heard of the pillows that light up when your partner goes to sleep, they may have a patent on this, but there is a pillow that is for long-distance relationships that lights up when your significant other goes to sleep - good job explaining market - - distance-relationships-less-lonely - I like your concept much better, easy to have on you, see if you can license the technology or look into patents now to see what type of barriers to entry you can put up Book Shelf - good intro, good eye contact - try not to read of paper or slides, practice presentation as much as possible - good job addressing market size - is advertising how you make money - I kinda got lost Infinite DJ - good job presenting and getting market across - sounds interesting - why would club whose brought dj in let this happen? - Good job of explaining business model - Good job explaining how you will get big - Slides are good, but maybe get some more money numbers across the slides ExerSaur – my group! - nice logo! - Good prep, handouts are really good! - Try not to read off of paper - Great slides! - $ sign next to 11.7 mill I couldn’t see but was that supposed to be there?? - I like the competitive aspect of it, really good. - Bottom-up research? A quote from a physician would be great - Good job with Hasbro, be careful that they do not steal it!...big companies are greasy, everyone is greasy, so be careful what you share with them. Get a patent
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pending in ASAP- you can do that now its not too hard, and can add a lot of clout in presentations – especially in pitches - I may have missed it, but where is the bus model? How much money are you charging, how much will you make in 5 th year, granular economics of costs. - Slide prototypes would be great -
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  • Fall '11
  • DannyWarshay
  • Jeremy Russell

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