Analysis”, I use “there” repeatedly in the wrong context, “These researchers said things about how the people being researched exercised on days of there choosing…” (Rhetorical 5). Here “there” should have been “their”. I still struggle with this problem because in my paper, “The New Fairy Tale”, I write, “People model there relationships and values…” (3). Here again “their” should have been used instead of “there”. This is something I know I struggle with and will probably struggle with there rest of my years as a writer. Another mistake I made last semester that I still make this semester is awkward wording of sentences. In my paper “Cloning Research”, I write, “Researchers argue that a cloned organism is not the same as an egg that had been fertilized by a sperm” (3). Then in my paper “Brotherhood”, I wrote, “Hosseini chose to place this view right at the beginning of the book to sort of set up to the audience the relationship Amir and Hassan had and to foreshadow on things to come” (1). There are obviously major issues with both these sentences I wrote. I think I have improved in writing clearer, but I think that is something I still need a lot of work on.