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The information here is chopped up too much. For example, the first three bullets that involve team skills and team participation should be combined into a single item that covers matters that pertain to teams. The rest of the list has similar problems.
The best format for presentation of special capabilities and accomplishments works best for your résumé would be:Special Capabilities and Accomplishments:Considerable team and leadership experience. I have both been a role player and a team leader in several successful team efforts at Trader Joe’s.I created an innovative social networking website for employee scheduling at Trader Joe’s. This website was adopted by the national Trader Joe’s corporate management. I was awarded a special commendation for my effort.Fluent in SpanishManagerial skills—I have experience in supervising others in a fast-paced grocery environment.I am a club-level soccer player and played for four years on my high school soccer team, serving as co-captain in my senior year.This bulleted list effectively summarizes your special capabilities and accomplishments. Each bullet describes a separate and discrete item. The presentation is accessible and easy to comprehend.EducationIn a functional or combination résumé, skills and capabilities are emphasized, and work experience and education are de-emphasized.With this in mind, which way of presenting your education works best for you?YOU CHOSE OPTION 3
EducationI have a BS in Economics from Syracuse University. In addition, I have completed course work for CPA eligibility that included courses in tax prep, auditing, statistical accounting, andcost accounting. I am eligible to take the CPA exam.You decided to present your education in the following manner:EducationI have a BS in Economics from Syracuse University. In addition, I have completed course work for CPA eligibility that included courses in tax prep, auditing, statistical accounting, andcost accounting. I am eligible to take the CPA exam.The information in this paragraph should be presented in a bulleted format, or some other easy-access format. The paragraph is also too long and detailed for a functional or combination résumé.The best way to present your education would be:Education6/2009-present Accounting for CPA Eligibility5/2008 Bachelor of Science in Economics
In a functional or combination résumé you want your educational section to be as compact as possible, presenting only the most important information in a small amount of space.Job ExperienceIn a functional or combination résumé, skills and capabilities are emphasized, and work experience and education are de-emphasized.With this in mind, which way of presenting your job experience works best for you?YOU CHOSE OPTION 3Employment Experience 10/2009 to present Inventory Analysis For clients of Professor Kingston 12/2008 to present Stock Employee/Assistant Manager Trader Joe's, Chicago, Illinois 10/2006-5/2008 Delivery Person Walter Florists, Syracuse, New York Flower delivery Arrangement Cashier, counter workYou decided to present your job experience in the following manner:Employment Experience10/2009 to present Inventory AnalysisFor clients of Professor Kingston17/2008 to present Stock Employee/Assistant Manager
This is appropriate for a functional or combination résumé. It includes only the most relevantjob experience and presents it in a compact form. Excellent

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