Messages for Analysis: Creating a Businesslike Tone
1) Sentence Analyses
1. This is a strong sentence; it`s not too long and gets to the point.
2. This sentence is too long. Even though it`s good to be proud of having highquality products, repeating the s
Although major league baseball remains popular, more people are attending
minor league games. Connecticut, for example, has three AA minor league teams: the
New Haven Ravens, the Norwich Navigators, and the New Britain Rock Cats, who are
a) So that your order can be processed promptly, kindly place it through our
b) It would be best if you could bring your credit card to the store.
c) A 25 percent discount on all sales of 15-inch models is being offered this week