Messages for Analysis: Creating a Businesslike Tone
1) Sentence Analyses
1. This is a strong sentence; it`s not too long and gets to the point.
2. This sentence is too long. Even though it`s good to be proud of having highquality products, repeating the s
a) So that your order can be processed promptly, kindly place it through our
b) It would be best if you could bring your credit card to the store.
c) A 25 percent discount on all sales of 15-inch models is being offered this week
Although major league baseball remains popular, more people are attending
minor league games. Connecticut, for example, has three AA minor league teams: the
New Haven Ravens, the Norwich Navigators, and the New Britain Rock Cats, who are