For HW-8, there are no sentence corrections for the homework.
For the Final Paper, here are the corrections.
Had to add it was to the beginning of my sentence, another standard day of school.
You told me to delete the word anyways in my thi
When his father, / who was old and twisted with toil / made over to him the ownership / of the farm / and seemed
content / to creep away / to a corner / and wait for death, / he shrugged his shoulders / and dismissed t
Create or find a table that lists the coordinating and subordinating conjunctions and also the conjunctive
adverbs & transitional terms, but that arranges them by meaning. Some of each type won't correlate;
they'll hang out, but list
Unscrambling Sentence Parts
Unscramble each sentence. Find two variations that are effective (i.e. grammatically correct.)
a. when looking out of her window
b. was a hearse
c. the first thing she saw
Unscrambled (2 correc
What is a game? A game is something you do with other people to occupy your time and
enjoy it at the same time. It could also be a form of play or sport the is especially a competitive
one played according to rules and decided by skill, str
The simple race format
o Competitive game between two or more players
o Running away from obstacles
Parts of sentences
Resource or territory acquisition
o Is similar to collecting but requires taking various pieces from ot
Question17 = WRONG - The principal (or main) reason she left was because of the noise.
Question18 = WRONG - I doubt he's smarter than I (am).
Question20 = WRONG - The Joneses and we used to live right next door .
Question21 = WRONG - Everyo
Poem for memory device or activity (13A)
(Showing the difference ways the words are used)
Know Your Stuff
When it comes to your and youre,
Youre making one choice.
Its your decision meaning its possessive,
Just listen to my voice.
Create or find a table that lists the coordinating and subordinating conjunctions and also the
conjunctive adverbs & transitional terms, but that arranges them by meaning. Some of each type won't
correlate; they'll hang out, but list them anyway. Th
The teacher would read a question on grammar or punctuation out loud so that all the
students are hearing and using their listening skills. There would already be two teams and one
player from each team would already be at the
What is gamification? It is the application of typical elements of game playing (e.g., point
scoring, competition with others, rules of play) to other areas of activity, typically as an online
marketing technique to encourage e
There are many different kinds of games that you could create in order to remember all
these different things including a way to remember the grammar and sentence stuff you need to
know, but in my eyes, this game may be the most effective.
You could do flash cards for the game on sentence errors
Saying the answer to the question out loud and you play with partners
Then it is a race to the board with wet paper towels
Players write the answer to the flash card on the board
College Writing 110
7 October 2016
What is a memorable incident you might say? Lets just say that it would be something
that has happened in your life that has caused such a dramatic event that you w
Why do I think Nick dumped Margery? There are many reasons that could come up from as to
why he dumped Margery, but let me tell you one thing, he does not feel good afterwards. Nick, towards
the beginning part of this story, seemed to be a
In a lot of ways, Nick's dad is a stock father figure. Instead of playing catch, he just takes his son
along for some, shall we say, less conventional father-son bonding instead. But as if his fatherly-ness
didn't make him authoritative eno