Written business correspondence refers to messages sent email or as regular paper memos or
letters. Typically these messages are relatively short and can have a Santry of purposes, such
as to inform the reader of an upcoming meeting, to request informatio
ANSWERS ARE RIGHT, BUT MY SENTENCES WERENT ALL CORRECT MAKE SURE TO
Sentence Structure Quiz
1. A After selling one of the smaller presses, the company acquired two new ones.
a. My example: I will pick you up from work today.
2. C Even tho
Dr. Charles A. Wright
President, Weber State University
Vice President of Activities
DATE: October 1, 2013
Weber State University Accounting Club
As the President of Weber State University you have a vested interest in seeing every student
Comments: DOCS Design: 15 Organization: 10 Content: 60 Sentences: 10 punctuation -3
You attitude for tone -2
DATE: October 1, 2013
2014 NATIONAL ACCOUNTING CONFERENCE
I am pleased to inform you that your r
1. C Are you sure he was the one who called you for a date last Saturday?
a. My Example: Is she the girl who locked her keys in the car last Sunday?
2. D Jill told me that she doesnt see any point in our continuing negotiations with Ro
Free List for Routine Message
Love to see employees take initiative
Love the drive and will to be better
Soaking up the ideas, processes, etc to bring back to company
ability to learn new programs to help be more efficient
come back with fresh ideas
Punctuation of Sentences
1. B This job requires long, tiring hours of work, but you will have great people to work
a. My sentence: Being a parent involves many lengthy, sleepless nights, but in the
end it is worth it to see the smile on you
September 10th, 2013
Ms. Diana Green
Houston, TX 12345
Dear Ms. Green:
In May of 2014 I will be graduating from Weber State University with a bachelors degree in accounting.
Given the longstanding success of the Houston Rocke
Group 7-Chapter 2 Outline Activity
A. Retail Price: $449.99
B. 2-yr Contract: $99.99
The benefit of an Android device when comparing price of an iPhone is you can find a more inexpensive device
with comparable pro
Chapter 5 Revising and Editing Text Activity
6. Critique and revise the following message, checking all design, organization, content, and
Thanks you for your order of 6 DVDs. If Only They Were more motivated, Send me an
email, and Oh, N
February 25, 2014
Mr. Allan Hall
3848 Harrison Blvd.
Ogden, UT 84408
Dear Mr. Allan Hall:
I am writing to you regarding THE student scholarship awards for the accounting
department. I believe these scholarship awards will help encourage the students to
1. A Subjective
a. My Example: I am glad to be able to be here today.
2. B Him
a. My Example: We knew it had to be him who left that gate open.
3. C Dan and I will be in charge of Fridays activities.
a. My Example: Steve and I will be t
1. D Because Im on Susy Slims low-cholesterol diet, I avoid French pastries.
a. My Example: Moochies in Salt Lake City makes the best New York style pizza in
2. A When he was in the Middle East, he learned much about Jew
Comments: DOCS Design: 15 Organization: 10 Content: 56 condense first paragraph. Too
much review of his request. Make the days "Paid time off" for a more attractive
alternative-4 Sentences: 9 punctuation -5 tone -1 "Thank you . . ."
Her Comment: Align headings at the same tab. See memo example p. 72 of text. See
comments on screen and revise for the final version.
ALSO NOTE THAT I WAS A BUDGET ANALYST IN THIS PAPER.I
CAN SEE THE FUTURE APPARENTLY! Hahaha
To: Clint Hout
Agreement and Reference Quiz
1. C One of the candidates who are being evaluated is my nephew.
a. My Example: One of the players who scored a goal is my son.
2. D One of grandparents is coming for a visit this weekend.
a. My Example: We are having
Language of Sentences
1. A firefighter
a. My Example: The mail carrier was always nice enough to bring the mail to my
door during the winter.
2. C principle
a. My Example: The principal reminded the students that honesty is a principl
Grade 90/105 (I literally made no changes from my rough draft because I didnt have time
also I put both the cover letter and job announcement on here for you but they are
supposed to be 2 separate files)
Comments: 11 PAR missing in the education paragraph
Comments: DOCS Design: 10 letter format is missing -5 organization: 10 Content: 55
Benefits for Dr. Wight missing -5 Sentences: 5 punctuation -5 tone -5 show confidence
remove all references to busy schedule and reword -3 Use a more profess
1. B I called at 7:00 a.m. and again at 7:30 p.m., but he mustve slept through both of my
a. My Example: Practice will start at 3:30 p.m. on Mondays and 5:30 p.m. on
2. C In the months since December, our complaint