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September 27, 2013
Cardiovascular disease and Breast Cancer are two of the biggest diseases that are in the
United States. These two diseases among other diseases are not only caused by genetics but
also by the way a person has their lif
August 11, 2013
I would like to do my final essay on two chronic diseases. The two diseases I would like to do it on is
Breast Cancer and Heart Disease. I love learning new things about the body. I just found out that my
Aunt just got di
August 5, 2013
Academic writing using different ways of expressing yourself like purpose, audience, tone and content.
Using these different things will help to express what you are try to express to your audience. First you
need a reason
September 22, 2013
I will do a lot of editing to my essay. It has a lot of slang in it. I have to revise my grammar. I usually use
slang when I text so I need to learn the right way to speak. I will also add my opinions and also add some
September 22, 2013
The results for my essay are that I used a lot of slang in my essay. My essay is all jumbled and some of it
doesnt need to be in it. My topic sentence states directly my thesis. It is all about comparing the two
September 7, 2013
Heart Disease and Breast Cancer are chronic diseases that are not both carried by a family trait.
I am going to organize my essay by Order of Importance.
The Risks of Heart Disease
Have I written about an appropriate topic for the assignment?
Have I sufficiently researched the topic using credible sources?
Have I clearly understood why I am writingfor example, to inform, to
persuade, or to narrate?
Do I s
September 15, 2013
There are so many diseases out there in this world. A lot of them arent caused by genetics. It is caused
by the lifestyle that a person lives. Some diseases are also inherited by parents and genetics. Heart
Unit 1 Discussion
Effective communication is essential as a writer you should convey clear, precise,
and specific meaning of your topic to your audience. Communication to your
audience as a writer should pose sufficient development of paragraphs. Having