1. Professional text: peer reviewed article found using the UC Merced Library
database search engine (article: Chacha, Chacha Emmanuel, and Method R.
Kazaura. "Body-Art Practices Among Undergraduate Medical University
Students In Dar Es Salaam, Tanzania,
1. John took the bus to the hospital, walked the long hallways to find his daughters
room; knowing that when he turned the knob, hed see her in that hospital bed again.
John talked with his daughter in her hospital room as if nothing was different, becaus
1. Stronger narrative sentence from response 8: Every hero always has a
Expansion: Every hero has a weakness, due to the demand of the audience.
Superman has been screwed with his love for two planets, Kryptonite, and his
girl. Captain America a
Writing is a great tool to use for therapy because it allows people to use it as a
form of expression. Both emotions and feelings can be a difficult and sensitive topic
for people to express in other forms of communication, especially when it is a
When You Find Her
The building was bigger then huge, with tall pyramids made out of glass and
pillars everywhere supporting the infrastructure. There were so many different directions
and staircases, but I could still hear her, beckoning me. I knew what s
1. a. You have lots of good stuff, but as you turn it over and over, you cant find
the center, the main point, the one thing that sums it all up. You are trying to
wrestle a powerful snake into a bottle. It writhes and writhes and you cant
get control ove
9:14 PM Marvel Addicts
When Steve Rodgers became Captain America nothing changed about him
more then his appearance and physical abilities. He may be able to control a shield
better, run faster, think on his feet; but he is still genuin
Behind Every Nook and Cranny
Keep good company- that is, go to the Louvre.-Paul Cezanne
I.M. Pei allures you into his art due to how odd it is; surrounded by the tall gold
cylinders that hold the buildings surrounding it, with the tall, triangu
Writing a blog column that also in a way acts as a love letter targeted at Captain
America, or Chris Evans, fulfills the basic need to write. The Generating Principle of my
piece was very easy because it was also suppose to be a reflection of one of the r
Booth, Eric. Everyday Work of Art: awakening the extraordinary in your everyday life.
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Elbow, Peter. Writing with Power: Techniques for mastering the writing process. Oxford
University Press; 2 edition.1998. Print.