Poorly Written Sentences
1. The supervisor had everyone to mutually cooperate together or a lawsuit against the company
would be filed.
The sentence was incorrect because it used everyone and someone together. Should be
singular or plural.
2. Based on her
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Effective Communication in the workplace can be either make your organization or break it. When its
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Engstrom: Milestone One
Engstrom Auto Mirror is in trouble. The privately owned business that manufactures
mirrors for trucks and automobiles, was in jeopardy. Engstrom troubles from production delays
to quality control were ever increasing. For a