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"Through Ms Shurui 's presentation, i was inspire by her effort, her success. Since being a girl living in a small viilage in China, she moved to US and achieve success in engineering. As in her speech, she mentioned that communication skills are very essential for each of us not only at work, school, family and in realationship also.
Bussiness skills are important even for engineering major because when you can communicate good with your team, co worker, it helps you achieve your project, your goal. Imaging that if you and your co worker mis understanding because you have weak communication skills. It can ruin or destroy your work. Good communicator can inform, persuade, entertaion and convey listener. More importantly with manager or owner, communication skill is when you able to cultivate your employees or either customers, you will know the way to negociate or convey them, dealing with vendor.
Eventhough Ms Shurui did not attend any bussiness college but she still can obtain bussiness skills by learning on herself through books, research and also joining to group activities like dancing which is her hobby. I'm majoring in accounting which i though that just need to deal with the number, but after her speech, it changes my mind that bussiness skills are important for me to either for my interview for job or using them at work is both essential."
Ms. Shurui's presentation has inspired me and made me realize the value of hard work to achieve success. From her humble... View the full answer