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Limit the series of events to a few hours rather than this long period of time.Only include what is immediately important to the main story you are telling. narrow the scope of this story. Your whole story could just be when Andrew goes to Tiana's show and he is trying to convince her that they were in love, and tells her about their past together. Otherwise, you are trying to cover too much time with too many details.


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Do you remember
this face?
The sand artist program was occurring in
Switzerland; the program's name was Tiana's Sand
Artist. She was one of the famous Sand Artist in
Switzerland. On July 4th, after she finished her Tiana
and her sister, Tia was going back home. On there
way back to the home, they meet with an accident.
Tia only had minor injuries but, Tiana had major
injuries which cause her to memory loss. Tiana has
admitted to ICU; the Doctor called up Tia to talk about
her conditions and the situation now she's travelling
through.
The Doctor said, " due to this accident, Tiana has lost
her memory loss, she can only remember everything
for only 24hours, and even she can't even recognize
you tia."
Tia was depressed to hear that she can't remember
anything after 24 hours and even Tia.
So, Tia decided to creative memory book to
recognize who she has met each day to remember.
After 3-4 days Tian came back to home and Tia gifted
a memory book to write down all her memories.Do you remember
this face?
The sand artist program was occurring in
Switzerland; the program's name was Tiana's Sand
Artist. She was one of the famous Sand Artist in
Switzerland. On July 4th, after she finished her Tiana
and her sister, Tia was going back home. On there
way back to the home, they meet with an accident.
Tia only had minor injuries but, Tiana had major
injuries which cause her to memory loss. Tiana has
admitted to ICU; the Doctor called up Tia to talk about
her conditions and the situation now she's travelling
through.
The Doctor said, " due to this accident, Tiana has lost
her memory loss, she can only remember everything
for only 24hours, and even she can't even recognize
you tia."
Tia was depressed to hear that she can't remember
anything after 24 hours and even Tia.
So, Tia decided to creative memory book to
recognize who she has met each day to remember.
After 3-4 days Tian came back to home and Tia gifted
a memory book to write down all her memories.
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Andrew Holts is a successful businessman but
suffering from slight temporary memory problems.
Andrew is helping out with his family business with
his mom, Grace. Grace always get annoyed with
Andrew to get married to this girl called Melissa,
whom Andrew doesn't like. Andrew is just angry with
his mom just because she's forcing him to get
married, but Andrews and his Grandmother Anna had
a plan to get void the proposal with Melissa. Annas
plan was that Andrew would say that he is in love
with another girl, and the next day they're going to
have a date.
Sunrise up and starting a beautiful day Tiana was
looking through her memory book. Tia came with a
cup of coffee and Tiana said " Don't you have to
collect some book from the library at 9'clock. "
"Ohio I completely forgot about that" Tia.
"Oh no, I forgot too. Go get ready; it's already late."
Tiana
When Andrew was reading a newspaper and said
good morning to his family, they were surprised. His
sister asked him" Are you going like this for your first
date?"
Andrew " ahahah FIRST DATE ah, I shouldn't be
going like this, ah?"
Andrew was trying to wear his business meeting outfit
for his FIRST DATE, was being very nascent
businessman outfit.
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His sister didn’t like it, and finally, she decides one
outfit for him and his sister present him to his mum
and grandmom, and they were shocked because this
was there first time seeing him as not business
outfits. But his mom didn’t believe that he has a
girlfriend. Andrew saw praying to just over the day.
Andrew decides to call his friend so that he can have
his FAKE FIRST DATE with him. Meanwhile, Andrew’s mum doubts him going to a
DATE. Grace called Alex and told him to watch over
Andrew and find out if he has a girlfriend. Andrew
went to the Swiss Chuchi Restaurant. He was sitting
one of the tables, and he was screwed up and try
calling Alex, but he didn’t pick up. He was disturbed
than he suddenly saw a book“ MEMORY TIPS". He
went to buy that book, the person at the counter told
him that“ sir, this is the last copy." “ oh well, that’s awesome." When turning around, he saw Alex hanging around
there but trying to hide from him. Andrew tries to
catch Alex. meanwhile, Tiana was looking at books
and saw the same book as Andrew. She went with
the book to upstairs to the restaurant. Andrew saw that, and he followed her to upstairs and
sat opposite to her and asked: “taking someone’s
book without there permission is a terrible habit in our
country.” “ it doesn’t mean that you can’t use it, I don’t
mind you using this book okay. But with my
permission okay u can ask“ “ Ask what?"
“ Permission come on, ask." Register person said, “ Sir, you forgot to take this
book? ’I {I If you could have made some noise, I wouldn’t have
taken that book from that girl.”
Andrew got shamed in front of Tiana.
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Tiana was laughing Andrew” Sorry that was by accident. I forgot my book
was on the counter.” “ well it’s okay everyone has a short memory, not a
big deal.” “this been quote wile this short memory, that why
when I saw this book. Ah if you don’t mind, you can
give me your old book, and you can take the new
book?” “ with your permission.” “ yeah with my permission.” “ it okay, any way to get rid of short memory you don’t
have to read these books, I can help you with that." “ This is my invitation to my program at Oberon mall
at 11:30 am, if you’re free, please come." “Sure” “Okay then bye ” “ by the way, I’m Andrew." “ Nice to meet you, Andrew." “ what was your name again? | forgot”
“I didn’t even tell you my name." Then Andrew found out Alex was watching him. “Why
didn’t u pick up the call?” “ phone is a complaint about two days” his phone
nngs. “ hmm it’s being repairing now, ohoo it’s ringing wow.”
“ pick up the call.” “Ahm okay” “ hello hello, I can’t hear.” “ it was mom, why did he moved away from me to talk
to her?" or did mom send him to watch over me?"
“who’s on your phone." “Girlfriend” “ Ohio defiantly mom send him” “okay then I will play
a game in front of him then mom is flat."
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"okay mate we will see. I'm on a date.'
Oho hoo"
" she was around here."
Where"
Here" " Tiana, not like you, she's an artist. He shows
he is in Oberon mall, so see you ah "He went to her
sand art program and he falls in love with her.
The next day Andrew was pleased to see her. It was
a casual day for Tiana. She wakes up to get ready to
surprise her sister's birthday. Tiana told Tia to meet
at aborne mall restaurant at sharp 10 am. Tiana
bought the gift for Tia meanwhile Alex forgot to
mention Andrew about Tiana's life. Alex tries to call
Andrew, but he didn't pick up. Andrew went to the
program organizer for sand artist and bought Tiana's
details and went to her home but she's wasn't there.
Andrew and Tiana were in the same restaurant, he
went up to her to talk, but she was so annoyed with
him because she doesn't know him. Tia and Alex
came Andrew was wondered why didn't she
recognize him. Tia told Andrew to get into her
memory book, to get into it, Andrew needs to be good
friends with Tiana. Tia, Andrew and Alex planned for
Andrew to get into her memory book. Each day they
were getting close to each other, and finally, he got
into her memory book. One day they both were going
to say something serious, but suddenly Andrew's
mom called to come back to the office for an
international Office meeting. Grace told Andrew that
Tiana needs to be at there house for three days until
his family function. Tia, Alex and Andrew were trying
to convince Tiana to stay at Andrew's home for three
days.
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Tia pretends that she has to go to Italy due to her
work part. Tiana agrees to stay at Andrew’s house,
but she was scared, how will Andrew’s parents react.
Andrew’s sister Racheal introduce Tiana as her best
friend to everyone. Grace wants to compare how
better is Tiana is from Melissa. Grace was talking
about family function details, and Tiana said she
could help to make that function much higher than the
plan they have. Grace said okay to. Andrew’s family
members don’t know that she’s a memory loss girl, so
his grandmom bought her video recording thing from
Amazon to help her to recognize everyone each
morning. Tiana wakes up early each morning and
listens to the last day recordings. On the previous day
morning, Tiana forgets to save the previous day video
recordings, and she was stressedbut she have
written everything in a boo so she can memories
everything from that. The next day Tiana forgets him
but reminds herself about him after reading her
memory book. Then says that they can never stay
together and so she tears his memories from her
book. They go their separate ways. Later Andrew is
travelling to the US for a business meeting, and he
meets Tia at the airport. She says that Tiana is fine.
She then shows him the video of Tiana’s program.
He sees himself in the picture she has drawn in the
video. that moment he cancelled his US trip and went
to her show. She sees him and she started drawing
her image of him on the screen. He asked her
whether she remember him or not but she said she
still doesn’t know him but she has some images of
him in her memories. Andrew was so depressed and
he left suddenly she saw his mum at the program she
was doing. Tiana started drawing Andrew and his
mum told him to turn back and to look on the screen.
When looks at the screen he sees himself. He runs
back to the stage and asked her whether she doesn’t
really know him then how did she draw his face. She
replied “ even without knowing you I use to draw your
pictures. Then she realizes that even is she forgets
everything for 24 hrs she will never forget him and his
love for her as she loves him.

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