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Identifying tone and formality in others' writing is an important

first step. A more challenging task is revising a piece of writing with ineffective tone and formality, so that there is improved consistency and style. We will practice this skill by revising messages with inappropriate tone and formality.
In addition to improving its tone and formality, ensure that your revised message follows the direct approach. You may have to rewrite the first sentence of the message so that the purpose is stated directly to the reader, immediately in the opening sentences.






Instructions: Revise the message below so that it has improved tone and formality. Also, revise it for better organization (use the direct approach). Post your revision to OneNote. WRITE IT IN FORMAL, INFORMAL, AND SEMI-FORMAL. ( according to professor we have to write three emails one formal informal and semi formal and the editing email is provided down below).*** i have only thing information..***


To: National Book Sales
From: Claude Ceci
Date: August 11, 2017
Subject: Hello!
Hi there,
I am a new publisher with some really great books to sell. I saw your announcement in Publishers Weekly about the bookseller's show you're having this summer, and I think it's a great idea. Count me in, folks! I would like to get some space to show my books. I thought it would be a neat thing if I could do some airbrushing on T-shirts live to help promote my hot new title, T-Shirt Art. Before I got into publishing, I was an airbrush artist, and I could demonstrate my techniques. I've done hundreds of advertising illustrations and have been a sign painter all my life, so I'll also be promoting my other book, hot of the presses, How to Make Money in the Sign Painting Business. 
Claude
PS - Please tell me what it costs for booth space as soon as possible so I can figure out whether or not I can afford to attend. Being a new publisher is pretty expensive!

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