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Lama Samjhana Lama Robert Lunday Ph. English 1301 15 February 2013 Episodes I'd never rewind Early in the morning, the loud roar overshadows the...

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Lama Samjhana Lama Robert Lunday Ph.D. English 1301 15 February 2013 Episodes I’d never rewind Early in the morning, the loud roar overshadows the boisterous children playing outside of our courtyard. The world seems indifferent, everyone doing their own small activities here and there, the whistling of our aunt’s pressure cooker downstairs, the sharp strutting of people moving towards the town for work through our corridor, the infuriating screams of kids whose mothers are working in the carpet factory beside our house, leaving their children unfed and dirty. On the other part, our home is totally in turmoil. Searching, running here to there, dialing calls to unknown but related peoples, palpitating and getting furious are all what we were doing. Especially, Appa, which means dad in our language, is scaring us and threatening “If your mom is again at that Annapurna Hotel, She is dead when she’ll come back later.” Annapurna Hotel is one the popular 5-star hotel, infamous for attracting unwary people of our city in its Casino. My heart starts to thump faster as I think about her coming back and standing in front of our grand green gate. I’m sitting at the rooftop observing the people walking on the road and coming towards the way to our corridor. The gate makes a strange unpleasant sound when somebody enters inside. I heard it. I just looked down with controlling the outburst of emotions. That’s the shawl my mom got it from ‘Thamel’ market, an exotic place where thousands of tourists flock every year in the country. I can see it even if my eyes cannot catch the distant prospect. Such a huge relief! Aunt and my niece are heading to school. I know! my aunt has such an annoying
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habit of wearing my mom’s stuff without even asking her just once. Aunt is yelling and showing affection to my dear niece at the same time “This is your 10$, just eat good food in school, Do not buy that stupid rollerblade. Understood?” The sun is scorching more and more, it is already 10’ O clock in the morning. My brothers, underestimating my dad’s anger, are playing ps2. One cycler is hitting with bottles to the weaker one, jumping across the massive mountain, walking through the volcanic trails, my brother screams “yeah! Don’t challenge your dad”. They don’t know, as satirical as it sounds, as ferocious as it is going to be later in our house. The slaughterhouse would not be that earsplitting as our house. The gate made that sound, Mom stepped on the stairs. As soon as she forwarded a step, the lion which was roaring the whole time attacked and intimidated her. His huge hands grasping the collar of mom’s t-shirt and dragging her onto the roof of our house, the whole scene is like a nightmare but not like the usual dream which is forgetful but and blurry but that one which creates a huge effect deep inside the mind and heart. Nevertheless we, my brothers and I, were emotionally attacked as we witnessed everything, things would obviously implant in our mind. Everyday same promise for not entering inside the Casino’s door but breaking it all the time, it is our daily show. My brother appeases me making funny jokes about our family matters and I use to forget and smile like it is a short movie that is coming to an end. “Sister, our neighbors might be getting excited for new episode of our daily series.” I use to be clueless what he is talking about. But later on, when I’ll understand it, I laugh at it alone.
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