I am looking for help with this writing assignment. I need to...

I am looking for help with this writing assignment. I need to pre-write, plan, draft, revise and proofread. I have uploaded the instructions for the assignment, my pre-write and a few additional questions that need to be answered. 

My sophomore year of high school I had an adverse experience with my English teacher. Throughout elementary and junior high school I did well in my English classes. I had every expecta±on
when I wrote my Frst paper in sophomore English that I would receive a passing grade. When my paper was returned I found a big red ² on my paper. I spoke to the t4eacher about my grade and was told I could re-write the paper. I tackled the correc±ons with gusto and conFdence. Once completed I turned in
my revised paper. When I received the paper back, tears streamed down my face when I saw a D.
I con±nued to work hard at wri±ng a paper my teacher would deem worthy of a passing grade. Others in
my class were turning in papers and receiving passing grades.
I began to feel like my teacher did not like
me.
I spoke to my father, an elementary school teacher, about the problems I was experiencing with English
class. My father tutored me and assisted with my next paper, again I failed. My father spoke to the
English teach and found her to be very set in her way of thinking about me. He then went to the school’s
principal and requested I be moved to a di³erent English class.
This experience has le´ me with self-doubt as to my ability to write a proper paper. When a wri±ng project presents itself I feel overwhelmed and less than enthusias±c about the project.

ASSIGNMENT 04 C02 Business English
Directions : Be sure to save an electronic copy of your answer before submitting it to Ashworth
College for grading. Unless otherwise stated, answer in complete sentences, and be sure to use
correct English, spelling and grammar. Sources must be cited in APA format. Your response
should be four (4) double-spaced pages; refer to the "Assignment Format" page located on the
Course Home page for specific format requirements.
Part A
Step 1: Download the handout.
• Writing and You
Step 2: Write a paper.
In a one-page paper, address the following:
• Perform each step as directed in the handout: Prewrite, Plan, Draft, Revise, and
Proofread.
• Clearly label each step so it is clear how you progressed from your initial paragraph to
your final version.
Part B
Revise the sentences.
(1) Revise the following sentences so that the subject and verb of each sentence identify key
actors and actions:
• The dedication of professors to multiculturalism is crucial to encouraging students of
all races to succeed.
• Currently, the percentage of full-time African-American professors teaching in
American universities is less than eight.

Wordsmith: Guide to College Writing , 3/E, Pamela Arlov. Published by Prentice Hall. Copyright © 2007 by Pearson Education, Inc.