1. Look closely at the sample student paper and revision included...

1. Look closely at the sample student paper and revision included in the Handbook in Sections 4 through 6. What changes do you see between the first and second draft of the paper? Do you see an improvement between the two? Give an example. Do you think the final draft is better than the first one? What do you see as an improvement? (100 words)

2. What other point could you give as a difference between the revisions? (50 words)