I need help to revise my essay.
1. The body paragraph should always follow the thesis statement. (In body paragraph, I has strayed from the thesis)
2. Make my intro completely.
3. My body paragraphs are not organize. The second paragraph required to be the analysis of Carla, the third paragraph required to be the analysis of Bethany, the following paragraph required to discuss about relationship between the two characters and what the beauty bring them is.
4. 4-5 pages ( not include work cited page)
(The version of "Beauty, by Jane Martin" can be find on Google)
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