I need to write a personal essay. I am having trouble connecting my

supporting paragraphs with my thesis statement. Can you help me make my personal essay connect better? Attached is a copy of my essay with all of the instructors notes. 

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RUNNING HEAD: THE AIR FORCE CHANGED MY LIFE The Air Force changed my life Kyle Walker ENG 121 English Composition I Instructor: Vonette Lanier Braswell June 26, 2016 1 - 1 - [no notes on this page]
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