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ASSIGNMENT 4: PERSUASIVE PAPER PART 2: SOLUTION AND ADVANTAGES 1
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Appendix A: Peer Review Feedback Form 2
Reviewer’s Name: _________________________________________ Date: _____________
Writer’s Name: _______________________________________
Course: _________________________________________________ Section:
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Assignment 4: Persuasive Paper Part 2: Solution and Advantages
Peer reviews should provide feedback to a peer on the criteria expected in the paper. Follow
these instructions:
1) Receive a classmate’s paper from your professor (in class if on-ground; by e-mail if
online).
2) Copy the Peer Review Feedback Form from the Appendix.
3) Comment on all criteria, noting strengths and / or areas for improvement on the
feedback form.
4) Provide completed Peer Review Feedback Form and classmate’s paper to your
professor.
Note : On-ground students should submit the feedback form and paper to the professor
during the class meeting in which the paper is reviewed; online students should submit the
feedback form and paper to the professor via the Assignment Tab in the course shell.
Criteria Comments
+ Strengths < Areas for Improvement
1 Revise, using feedback from the professor
and classmates, your Persuasive Paper
Part I - A Problem Exists.
2 Part 2
Included a defensible, relevant thesis
statement clearly in the first paragraph.
3 Explain a detailed, viable solution that
supports your thesis. This should be one or
two (1-2) paragraphs.
4 State, explain, and support the first
advantage (economic, social, political,
environmental, social, equitable,
ethical/moral, etc.) to your solution. This
should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.
5 State, explain, and support the second
advantage (economic, social, political,
environmental, social, equitable,
ethical/moral, etc.) to your solution. This
should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.
6 State, explain, and support the third (and
fourth if desired) advantage (economic,
social, political, environmental, social,
equitable, ethical/moral, etc.) to your
solution. This should be one or two (1-2)
paragraphs.
7 Use effective transitional words, phrases,