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I am applying to mechanical engineering (not to a university) and

I need someone to look at my personal statement and give me some general fixing on what to add or cut, I also need to make it 80 characters shorter, but I don't know what to cut. Please ask me any information you need from me.

I was always fascinated by astronomy but I found I was more interested in how we can get this informaTon and the instruments that made this possible, I soon realised that mechanical engineers are the ones that do much of this work. I became hooked in how rocket engines work because it’s amazing how combusTon only produces thrust in one direcTon. ±his was my introducTon to the mechanical engineering world since then I have started to learn more about design that goes into robots used in space and in ground and design in manufacturing. I believe mechanical engineering is the most important work a person can make, shaping the future using new technologies such as 3D prinTng and designing machines and maintaining the ones we depend on so much. I am excited to develop my physics and maths knowledge, because even though it is interesTng to learn about Pascal's Principle, using it to design a hydraulic cylinder and calculate the outcome, is what ma²ers the most. I spend a lot of Tme on simulaTon games, such as Kerbal Space Program. where I design machines where the physics is accurate to the real world, I enjoy to designing rockets and calculate the result beforehand to see if I am right, I am excited to learn CAD and be able to this more accurately and in a professional manner. I want to have a career in the aerospace industry, having seen the investment and advancement made in the industry such as Blue Origin and Virgin. I want to be part of this ever evolving world and help it grow. I enjoy problem-solving and always try to improve my technique by solving puzzles from books such as "My Best MathemaTcal and Logic Puzzles" by MarTn Garden. I recently found the InsTtuTon of Mechanical Engineers, and I have booked to a²end lectures to help me view the industry from a more business oriented perspecTve and to hear others experience and advice, and begin networking early. If you give me a chance I will take full advantage of the course resources and extra-curricular acTviTes and aim to be a top student in order to get the top opportuniTes.
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