I asked you to read "The Hazards of Movie Going" and gave you both a sample paragraph on the subject and a sample essay.
I have added a handout: Developing a Thesis, which includes exercises for you to complete. It's simple enough. I am asking that you read the sample paragraph and essay to determine what goes into the writing of each.
Then, I am asking you to read the second handout on developing thesis statements. The exercises ask you to critically assess your diagnostic paper to determine how you could improve it. You do not have to rewrite your paper. You will be graded on your own critique. Show me what you have learned.
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