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Hello Professor Ludovici and Classmates, Experiencing a Different Culture I love traveling and seeing new places, so when the opportunity arose for travel to the Bahamas, I took it quickly. This was one of the most memorable trips I ever experienced. Seeing the wonderful Atlantis Resort and Casino was timeless and mesmerizing. On arrival at the airport, passengers were greeted with the sounds of drums, blowing of conch shells and beautiful voices singing melodious native songs. The music sounded so lively and upbeat that many passengers begin dancing. As we drove away from the airport to the hotel, the scenery was beautiful and breathtaking. I stared out of the window curiously as the echo of drums and conch shells rang in my ears. I was so excited to check into the hotel and begin my adventure. During my tour, I visited a beach that was clean and pristine with its clear blue waters giving me a calm and inviting effect. I then travelled to Atlantis, an exotic resort with hotels bustling with activities for the entire family. Whilst touring Atlantis, I came upon this bridge that was made up of wood and ropes. I was very afraid to cross because when I looked below there were a variety of fishes just casually swimming by, some looked very scary. After being coaxed into crossing, I did so reluctantly because the bridge was not sturdy and it started to make a creaking sound with each step. As I continued along my journey, I entered into a large aquarium where I saw lots of exotic water animals that I had never seen before. At some point in the aquarium, the feeling of suffocation overwhelmed me, I felt like I was inside the aquarium surrounded by sea creatures and the walls were closing in on me fast. As I proceeded towards the end of my tour of Atlantis, I observed the hustle and bustle of the natives going about their daily business, horns honking loudly and vendors encouraging every visitor to purchase native curios. I was left with a culture that denotes one of friendliness, peace and serenity that will be forever etched in my memory. My trip ended with a tour around the city where I was able to see the various kinds of people that exist on this small island; a place that I wanted to revisit soon. Now I am a citizen of this beautiful island. Thank You Francine Dames Questions 1. Did I achieve the goal of my trip? 2. Is there anything that should be changed or reworded? 3. Does this essay grab your attention?
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Hello Professor Ludovici and Classmates,
Experiencing a Different Culture
I love traveling and seeing new places, so when the opportunity arose for travel to the Bahamas,
I took it quickly. This...

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