Books : The Communist Manifesto (Marx and Engles)
On liberty (John Stuart Mills)
Prompt: Would the application of Mill's conception of liberty solve the problems that Marx and Engels identified in modern society? In crafting your response, you may pay particular attention to Mill's concept of the "tyranny of the majority" and Marx's concept of alienation.
Thesis: The application of Mill's conception of liberty in his book On Liberty is not a solution to the problems in modern society that Marx identified in The Communist Manifesto. Due to the selfish nature of humans, the implementation of Mills ideas in modern society would be essentially impossible.
Link for Thesis Structure : https://revelle.ucsd.edu/_files/humanities/writing-resources/4-thesis-statements.pdf
I am wondering how I could make my thesis much more solid. I understand that my thesis currently is just an answer to the prompt with a general reason.
Thank you in advance.
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