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Hi! Would you be able to help with my thesis statement for essay about

locavore movement? Here what i wrote "The locavore movement in the Hamptons is gaining traction with the local community and farmers, but is not practical due to the factors such as loss of nutritional value, environmental damage and that one should buy food harvested within 100 mile radius from their home."


And here what instructor commented "Your factors are unparallel.
factors such as what losing nutritional value?
damage to the environment
that one should buy food harvested within 100 mile radius is not a factor. Also, the other two are noun phrases. Keep it to all noun phrases."


Thank you so much

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