Attached below are three members posts for each doc pertaining to...

Attached below are three members posts for each doc pertaining to the written story. I need a half of a page single spaced for each response. Please read attached doc. This is for a creative writing course.

read and comment on the submissions of other students. You can start
out by saying what's strong in the piece--it could be the pace, tone,
character or setting--and then let the writer know what questions you
had at the end. Was there anything that took you out of the story?
Respond to your classmates with helpful specific comments. For
example, if you didn't follow a thought, ask if something was missing
following a certain line. Avoid empty statements like, "I liked it," and
say something specific as, "The choice of calling your friend a
kibblehead was original language."
P lease offer honest and
helpful feedback to alert the writer about places he/she
might need to change or develop. Try to let people know
what works well, and also what needs to be clearer, more
original, etc.
Complete and submit your first story (approx. 5 pages if it
were typed, double-spaced). Submit the story for the
professor to read. Keep in mind that when the course is over,
your work will vanish, so you may want to keep your work
saved in a location outside of the course program.
For this story, draw from your past, enhance and change , and tell
the story from a first person ( "I" ) perspective. Use
something from childhood or young adulthood. But be careful
not to write a story geared towards children. The material in
What If? is useful to help dive for ideas (for example, the